I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

Last Updated: 02.07.2025 00:30

I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

He doesn't like her cat

He forgets his wallet

He's never available on Saturdays

How has your life changed since starting college?

He always cracks his knuckles.

He is always late

He's always the last one to leave a party

My landlord just sold the house I’m renting from her. She included all fixtures, that I bought and installed. Does she have this right?

He's always helping his ex